This is my first book by Mindy Mcginnis and I received it in my ‘Fairyloot’ April monthly subscription box. I do love the fantasy genre, and I had just completed a book when this arrived, so I figured that I would choose this as my next read and avoid the agony that I normally go through as I peruse my book shelves to search for my next choice.
Lets start with the book’s synopsis:
KHOSA was born to be fed to the sea. To prevent the kind of wave that once destroyed the Kingdom of Stille. She can’t be sacrificed until she produces an heir, but human touch repels her…except for the touch of the Indiri.
Dara and Donil are the last of the Indiri, a native race with magic that’s seductive- a force of nature- but dwindling since the Pietra slaughtered their people.
Witt leads the Pietra, the fierce warriors who are now marching on the Kingdom of Stille. The stone shores of Witt’s Kingdom harbor a secret threat, and to ensure the survival of his people, he’s prepared to conquer every speck of Stille’s soil.
Vincent stands to inherit the throne of Stille, but has no wife to share it with. When the beautiful and mysterious Khosa arrives without an heir, Vincent knows that his father will stop at nothing to make sure she fulfills her duty. Torn between protecting his Kingdom and protecting the girl whose face is tied to its very existence, Vincent’s loyalty is soon at odds with his heart.
While royals scheme, Pietrans and the Indiri struggle to survive, the rising sea calls for its Given, and Khosa is destined to answer.’
Firstly I will have to say that I most likely would not have picked this book up myself after reading the synopsis. It appears too ‘busy’ too many characters and too many agendas vying for attention, and that usually puts me off.
However, I was certainly drawn in by the stunning book jacket design by Cliff Nielson and Maria Fazio.
This is a story told from multiple perspectives. Khosa’s chapters are the only ones written in first person, so I initially assumed that she was the main character with the others as supporting cast. However, as I read on, I felt this was not the case. Here is my own synopsis:
Khosa was conceived to be a sacrifice to the sea, as was her mother before her, and all female ancestors. Born out of superstition and fear, her life is a gift from the people from the Kingdom of Stille to the sea. They believe that by sacrificing ‘The Given’, to it, the sea, the sea would be assuaged from eating up the last of the diminishing land that it has been nibbling for generations. Khosa has been bred for this reason only, and her ‘keepers’ have succeeded in brainwashing her to yearn for this, without fear. As such, she has no hopes or ambitions other than waiting for her fate to be sealed. However, she needs to first choose a mate, and she is loath to do so as she is repelled by human touch. The people in the Kingdom are getting restless, as she cannot be sacrificed until she has produced an heir. Only then can she be taken to dance on the sea.
We soon meet the kind and honorable Vincent, who at the beginning of the story is third in line to the throne, and sees a dark future for himself of waiting in the wings forevermore, before fate finally calls him to become King. He is not particularly impatient for the throne, but he feels completely unmoored, drifting from day to day, just waiting for the day to arrive when he is able to perform the role that he was conceived to fulfill. Both Vincent and Khosa are victims of generations of fate and tradition; until the day they meet, when they see a true reflection of themselves in each other. It is only then that they begin to truly question their futures and whether the end can justify the means.
Add to this a cast of characters from different tribes with competing ambitions, and motivations, who are now put into situations where they have no choice but to question their own fates. The reader watches as the earth shifts beneath them all, and eons of tradition and rituals begin to be questioned by all. Is the future really set in stone?
I found this book to be well written, and I had no problem with the flow, despite the constant changing of perspectives and very short chapters. McGinnis deftly picks up the story from character to character as the perspective shifts, and she slips easily into the soul of the next person. Each chapter is headed with the characters name, to further assist, and avoid confusion.
I felt that the story was well executed, and I think it had a well-defined logic with an ending that wrapped it up nicely but could not be accused of being twee or predictable. Technically it was very good, and there lies my only problem with it.
I have to reiterate that while the story is very well written, I felt that it didn’t have as much soul as I would have liked. I felt that McGinnis didn’t delve into the characters hearts quite as deeply as I would have prefered. Or perhaps she did? Maybe none of the characters were capable of any feelings other than negative ones. But what I would have given for a happy moment or two in this book!
On the whole I felt it was a very sad and haunting tale. However, I felt it coasted along for at least three hundred pages before any action began, but it still managed to keep my interest until the end.
There were times when I did wonder how the author was going to bring this ship to shore satisfactorily in the diminishing pages that were left, but I have to concede that she did it with aplomb, and I didn’t close the book with any regrets, although I do have to say, that I did feel an overall air of depression threading right through the story, that was hard to shake.
I’m not familiar with Mindy McGinnis’ earlier works so I’m not able to compare and contrast it with them, but I’m trying to be as fair as possible. Perhaps I need to pick up another of her books to discover if the maudlin tone runs through all her work or if this was just accrued as part of this story.
This is my personal honest review. I’d be very happy to hear your own opinions of this book in the comments. I’d give it 3.75 stars for sure. It would have hit the 4 star mark if only there had been more lighthearted moments scattered throughout the pages.
I hope you’ve enjoyed this book review!
lots of love, Sally xxx